It is good to donate some amount of income to needy people. Directly help or support is beneficial to people who are in need, whereas others belive that national or international charity is the best way to donate. I will discuss both views in the upcoming paragraphs before reaching to its conclusion.
To begin with, many people argued that needy people should get help and support directly because direct approach to deprived people will let others know about their problems and poor condition in which they are going through. Moreover, people would get know more about need of people like what they need ,how much they need or why they need. Secondly, poor people's blessings will give them inner happiness and self satisfaction that they are not wasting their money and also this will encourage others to do same.
On the other hand, some individuals prefer that people should give money to national or international charities because these foundations are running for long time. So, they have accurate idea of what people want as they do regular surveys to poor areas and could donate in good place. The second predominant reason is that rich people like big businessman, politicians or celebrities do not have sufficient time to approach to every deprived person. So, they give their donations to charity or organizations.
To wrap it all, everyone should help needy people by donating things that they want. In my opinion, people should give money to national or international charity as they know more about need of people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...about need of people like what they need ,how much they need or why they need . Se...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eed ,how much they need or why they need . Secondly, poor peoples blessings will g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0234375 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54021538691 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53515625 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3691677506 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.166666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272719123619 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111160328585 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837801934171 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183701118668 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308276151144 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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