Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In different parts of the world sport programmes are being showed continiously on tv. some people think that it is useless for youngsters because of preventing them to participate in any sport themselves.
some people these kind of tv programmes discourage the young people from taking part in any sport clubs, but other people with me disagree this point. it is up to people's interests not tv programs.
Recent years technologies have changed than the past. According to this, there are too many apportunies to watch some kind of sport programs on tv or any kind of social medias.
some people think if children spend much time watching on tv , they are being insociable and their interests are burnt by this. but I disagree with this idea because of such programs, children know about different sport types they do not know. Moreover they help them to learn much about sport.
On the second hand, if young people watch sport on tv or search on a net, it encourages them. By this, they get acquainted famous sportsman or sportswomen while they know about these people's goals, their luxury lives and these kind of things create interests to do sport or participate in sport clubs. they would want to be like famous people. this is important reason to rise children's ability for sport types.
To conclude, some people think, the youth do not spend much time watching sport programs not to be inactive or insociable. but I think people do not afraid of that. More young people watch tv programs, or know about famous people's lives by searching on the net or like these social medias. they help them to learn much about sport types or sport clubs and by this way they have desire and this kind of information helps children to achieve goals. that is the reason why I agree this view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, so, while, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72115384615 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39592331038 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467948717949 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7116515985 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13799455134 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601877348092 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530140285082 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918699416667 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485442191922 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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