Change appears to be salient which is being advocated one's livelihood and mental health. Nevertheless, a massive clan has been spent their lives ,while doing identical duties, in contrast, rest of dwellers ,justify that modification has a huge significance. Meanwhile, this attempt would be talked over regarding both the vistas in the looming segment.
To commence with, the top tier motive beyond the storyline that are responsibilities. To be precise, they might not be capable to change due to, their family pressure and anxiety. Notwithstanding, in this contemporary scenario, one could not be shunned the competition behind jobs. Let's' say, the (TOI) the times of India newspaper survey had been exposed that 45% folks had already lost their jobs in 2020, because they are not satisfied and wanted to modify their work.
Having said that, the second bullet point needs to be safe duties. In easy words, in this category one can muse the goverment servant or employees because they might be satisfied with their work and a lumbsumb and handsome money.
Conversely, there are copious of inhabitants too, who consider the modifications crucial. Foregoing analysis, they are keen to believe that to achieve the goals, one must have to grab the chances and opporunities. Not to mention, they would apply several classification of pursuits because their needs are not limited and to fulfill their desires, they would be tried numerous of jobs and businesses.
To recapitulate, both kingpin's have their own judgements, however, according to my analysis, change should be necessary and one ought to be fostered these things in their lives to make it maverick.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... to be salient which is being advocated ones livelihood and mental health. Neverthel...
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Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... massive clan has been spent their lives ,while doing identical duties, in contras...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...al duties, in contrast, rest of dwellers ,justify that modification has a huge sig...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...be shunned the competition behind jobs. Lets say, the TOI the times of India newspap...
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Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun classification seems to be countable; consider using: 'several classifications'.
Suggestion: several classifications
...ities. Not to mention, they would apply several classification of pursuits because their needs are not...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, well, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24344569288 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86265342106 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625468164794 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8433169706 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.692307692 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978393258677 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342280191429 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393780823944 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638224193161 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441824128688 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.