Loving the motherland appears to be salient and this statement is being advocated by copious of folks.
However,there are wee portion of masses who has been critisized this notion. Meanwhile, this attempt would be talked over regarding a couple of vistas, along with my perception in the looming segment.
To commence with,motivation which is the top tier motive. To be precise, patriotism could be fostered numerous of dwellers to fix their mindset for achieving something not for their personal primacy,but for their nation.Let's say, In Times of india newschannel interview Dr.APJ Abdul kalam had been shared that because of his country India he rejected NASA's offer for joining.
Conversely, there might be the chances when indivduals had did denial classifications in order to made their respective terri-torry proud. Notwithstanding, we must be considered 26/11 attack when a troop was misguided by their kingpin had been attacked mumbai's luxurious hotel the taj and killed around 500 teenyboppers who were on trip.
To recapitulate, both the viewpoints had take their own trump cards and pitfalls ,but according to my analysis patriotism pragmatics ought to be overweigh its gloomy aftermath if,one make use of this reason in order to make their country proud and maverick.
- In spite of the advancements made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this case What can be done about this problem 56
- Many adults nowadays prefer spending their free time playing computer games why do they do this Is this positive or negative development 87
- SOME PEOPLE PREFER TO SPEND THEIR LIFES DOING THE SAME THINGS AND AVOIDING CHANGE OTHERS HOWEVER THINK THAT CHANGE IS ALWAYS A GOOD THINK DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION 78
- SOME PEOPLE PREFER TO SPEND THEIR LIFES DOING THE SAME THINGS AND AVOIDING CHANGE OTHERS HOWEVER THINK THAT CHANGE IS ALWAYS A GOOD THINK DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION 89
- Topic Some people say patriotism is the biggest cause of war But others believe that people are patriotic they are more likely to take an interest in a country s day to day running and therefore less likely to allow unscrupulous politicians to drive a cou 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, however, if, regarding, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40594059406 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00636517175 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707920792079 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.6474423144 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.5 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0381021988029 0.244688304435 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0123592933716 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0217052974665 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0193565577331 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242700400916 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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