Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 word
It is often said that things always change. While a number of people enjoy this rule because high risks often result in higher return, others resist the changes in life since they value safety. In my opinion, people should adapt to changes in life for growth and further achievements.
On the one hand, people who keep doing the same thing believe this behavior can help them stay away from potential risks. In other words, they always stay in their comfort zone to keep themselves from any dangerous situation. For instance, a child may refuse to learn to ride a bike since it is easy to fall when practicing that skill. Although they think this behavior can prevent them from any injury, it has also deterred them from possessing a fundamental skill in life. As a result, avoiding changes because of fear can have a negative impact on developing oneself.
On the other hand, numerous people always try to change, which is also an opportunity to achieve the finer things in life. These people suppose that more risks can lead to more profit. Take many start-up companies for example. Most of them know that starting a business of their own is a challenge, which a number of people have failed to overcome. However, Bill Gates, and Mark have succeeded with Microsoft and Facebook, which made them become the wealthiest men on Earth. Therefore, willingness to take risks and to change is an important factor for success.
In conclusion, even though resisting changes can make people feel safe in the short-term, I believe that if they want to grow and succeed in life, they should not only change their behaviors but also be ready to take necessary risks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... also be ready to take necessary risks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83216783217 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40459810235 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583916083916 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4134586023 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179283736556 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659540841465 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408880455296 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107495325042 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030357896783 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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