Recent decades have seen a sweeping phenomenon that brand new technologies have been keeping emerging. This results in enormously new positions in many industries. The subject of whether workers should engage in the same occupation or they should embrace diversities in their career is of great concern for themselves. In this essay, I will examine the both views and offer my opinion.
Advocates of focusing on the same endeavor have their solid grounds. Initially, it is definitely true that if people are occupied with the same matter for decades they will eventually become outstanding experts ...
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