Everyone of us has our own understanding of life. Some would like to do same things each day and live the same way all life without change, while others tend to maintain that it is good to experience change in life. Although the former style provides a safe and stable living, i would agree with the latter that change is a good part.
Many people prefer living a life, in which they know everything going on around, and have good control of what to expect in future. This type of people always have something in common, living in the same place, doing the same job, even wearing the same style of clothes in their entire lives. A good example of this is my uncle, who has been teaching in the primary school of our town for 20 years. He has no will to change his job or even move to the downtown.
Compared with the type above, other people think change is a good thing. This type of people are not satisfied with their current situation, full of passion to explore new places, new people and new values. There is a growing trend of this style as more people are traveling worldwide to see great views and to communicate with new friends. For example, to inspire new generation, majority of parents are encouraging their children to try new things such as new technology, new subjects, and to make friends with those from other places and of different nationalities. They have tremendous interested in the unknown world.
Despite the fact that we grew up in a context where it was popular to remain where you are and what you are, i believe that it is good and helpful to try new challenge in life.
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 67
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 78
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem? 73
- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 278, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tyle provides a safe and stable living, i would agree with the latter that change...
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Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...and have good control of what to expect in future. This type of people always have someth...
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Line 4, column 110, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... remain where you are and what you are, i believe that it is good and helpful to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1310.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47098976109 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34450371937 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563139931741 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1796927184 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.769230769 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287348653315 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940460359183 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972048672832 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150636883054 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820215624686 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.