Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Other, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
These days, with the advancements in the fields of science and technology, many multinational companies are looking for professionals who are capable of handling difficult tasks. However, many people often wanted to be in the same field doing same old tasks. I think this kind of attitude cannot help people grow in their field.
Firstly, doing the same old things overtime can lead to a decline in the professional growth of an employee, what I mean by this is that the person who does not want to learn new things in the growing world has a risk of leaving his position to more adaptable guy. For example, many technology companies often replace their employees with more flexible people who can do anything regardless of his past experience. Moreover, sometimes modernization can lead to decrease in popularity of old things people do. Hence, grabbing new tasks is very helpful both pesonally and professionally.
Secondly, people who avoid change in their lives are more prone to the danger of unsuccessful careers. For instance, college students who don't follow the priciples of modern methodologies can fail in their exams. Furthermore, humans who do the same work without any change, would not get promotions or increments in their jobs can result in family troubles, as everything is changing with the time.
Turning on to the otherside of the argument, the people who adapt to the change easily have successful and more happy life as they don't have problem of job failure or income. For example, If a company fires its employees due to financial problems than the person who always follows change have very little problem as the probability of getting new offer is high.
Additionally, change helps people to learn new things related to his surroundings or other people who are already at high level. There can be a definite surge in his knowledge related to society and modern gadgets.
To sum up, many people despite knowing the downsides of not adapting to changes, still work on old process. There are many drawbacks related to career, job and life of an individual, if they are not ready to adapt change. Someone who felt the problem of mobility with the telephone has invented cell phone making life easie. In my opinion, change is always needed as it reduces burden.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'things'' or 'thing's'?
Suggestion: things'; thing's
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Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, i mean, i think, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1920.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98701298701 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69069597511 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0888367463 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3888888889 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221190512907 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742948185054 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572938659732 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111883874495 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382363558659 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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