Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however think that change is always a good thing
Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion
Some argue that it is better to stay in the same job while others support taking new challenges in life. personally, I like change but I will discuss both views / both opinions in the following paragraphs.
People, who love stability in life, hesitate to change their jobs, routines or lifestyle. they create a comfort zone at their workplace and do not want to come out of it. Moreover, staying in the same job for a long time allows / enables them to gain expertise in that area / field / domain. they become source a source of knowledge and guidance for new comers. they also get to establish themselves as an authority in their field. however, this prevents them from learning new skills or identifying their hidden talents. what’s more, it is possible that after a while they will get tired of doing the same things again and again. this monotony will eventually lead to boredom and they may even lose interest in their job or routines.
Changing jobs and routines frequently, on the other hand, might seem daunting but it does not really have to be if one knows what one is doing. In this age of possibilities, coming out of one’s comfort zone is the only way to learn something new and explore new opportunities. while this might seem challenging, it will turn out to be a rewarding pursuit in the long run. For example, change gives a person exposure to various fields and opportunities to find a better job or better workplace. what’s more, while executives who are resistant to change will eventually get bogged down by the monotonous nature of their work, those who embrace change are insulated from this problem.
In conclusion, both sides of the argument have their merits; however, in my opinion, embracing change is essential to learn new things and realize our full potential. what’s more, change makes our life exciting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94303797468 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6831632888 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572784810127 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2751910037 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8823529412 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5882352941 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159014912452 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531891876245 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516606237663 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117604270369 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459801779793 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.