Nowadays, we live in an active and working society. Everybody is busy in their work to raise their ppfs. They also maintain a life style which cannot be possible without hardship. Some people just concentrate upon their work or its surrounding regardless to their private interest, whereas there are also people who prefer to make their routine life to be more enjoyable than their work. I strongly believe that people who work and complete their dreams side by side are more successful and tend to lead a fruitful life.
It is seen that people who run businesses are more tend to indulge themselves into money making process. Reasons of solely attachment is not to raise funds but because of the dynamicity of today's world bind them for 24 hours. No doubt, workaholic earn well and consequently live in a better life style. But on the long run, business man are more likely to move towards isolation. A business consist of ups and downs and when loss situations like crisis occur, people busy themselves even more compromising their family life. Sometimes, medical assistance becomes necessary to handle stress level.
There are also people who make their life more dynamic by incorporating both work and their hobbies. It has been demonstrated that there is a direct link between success and hobbies. People who choose a work out of their hobbies can make a good fortune. For instance, artists enjoy their work side by side fulfilling their hobby. Secondly, people who work in corporate or IT offices are also fallen into this category. They spend more time with their family which subsequently helps to reduce frustration or stress level.
So in my opinion, people who work and enjoy their life by pursuing can earn well, enjoy well and finally live well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Nowadays, we live in a active and working society. Everybody i...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...y to move towards isolation. A business comprise of ups and downs and when loss situations ...
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Line 3, column 560, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es, medical assistance becomes necessary to handle stress level. There are als...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'fallen'.
Suggestion: fallen
...ork in corporate or IT offices are also fall into this category. They spend more tim...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'for instance', 'no doubt', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233128834356 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.165644171779 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0766871165644 0.0946595960268 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0858895705521 0.0501214627716 171% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0858895705521 0.0437548338989 196% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0950920245399 0.122226691241 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0306748466258 0.0403226058552 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46323854471 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0306748466258 0.0326793684256 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0429447852761 0.0861772015684 50% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00920245398773 0.021408717616 43% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0306748466258 0.011925033212 257% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1751.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89562289562 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326599326599 0.374742101984 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.212121212121 0.28420135186 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148148148148 0.203846283523 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10101010101 0.137316102897 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46323854471 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56228956229 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 59.1090157513 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3902096514 49.517814964 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2777777778 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7743622355 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722222222222 0.814263465372 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 37.7121212121 49.1944974215 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.06363636364 1.69124875643 63% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344202580721 0.332605444948 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0675705124679 0.102741220458 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0676138305833 0.0668466124924 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.457862408179 0.534860350844 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196124862919 0.148594505496 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124146626774 0.134430193775 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824062546724 0.0742795772207 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.258860904526 0.324371583561 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0257398875221 0.0638462369009 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240034199957 0.228012699653 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0524969858384 0.058150111329 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
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Rates: 66.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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