Nowadays, we live in an active and working society. Everybody is busy in their work to raise their ppfs. They also maintain a life style which cannot be possible without hardship. Some people just concentrate upon their work or its surrounding regardless to their private interest, whereas there are also people who prefer to make their routine life to be more enjoyable than their work. I strongly believe that people who work and complete their dreams side by side are more successful and tend to lead a fruitful life.
It is seen that people who run businesses are more tend to indulge themselves into money making process. Reasons of solely attachment is not to raise funds but because of the dynamicity of today's world bind them for 24 hours. No doubt, workaholic earn well and consequently live in a better life style. But on the long run, business man are more likely to move towards isolation. A business consist of ups and downs and when loss situations like crisis occur, people busy themselves even more compromising their family life. Sometimes, medical assistance becomes necessary to handle stress level.
There are also people who make their life more dynamic by incorporating both work and their hobbies. It has been demonstrated that there is a direct link between success and hobbies. People who choose a work out of their hobbies can make a good fortune. For instance, artists enjoy their work side by side fulfilling their hobby. Secondly, people who work in corporate or IT offices are also fallen into this category. They spend more time with their family which subsequently helps to reduce frustration or stress level.
So in my opinion, people who work and enjoy their life by pursuing can earn well, enjoy well and finally live well.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'for instance', 'no doubt', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241590214067 0.247107183377 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.168195718654 0.155533422707 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0764525993884 0.0946595960268 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0825688073394 0.0501214627716 165% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0795107033639 0.0437548338989 182% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0948012232416 0.122226691241 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0336391437309 0.0403226058552 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47711929357 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0305810397554 0.0326793684256 94% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0428134556575 0.0861772015684 50% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00917431192661 0.021408717616 43% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0305810397554 0.011925033212 256% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1764.0 1933.35771543 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91946308725 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335570469799 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.218120805369 0.28420135186 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151006711409 0.203846283523 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.104026845638 0.137316102897 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47711929357 2.80594681477 88% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570469798658 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 60.6289204801 60.7387585426 100% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5555555556 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7003212554 49.517814964 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 127.492653851 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7743622355 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.722222222222 0.814263465372 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 38.3676360925 49.1944974215 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.12037037037 1.69124875643 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345432397854 0.332605444948 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0670241264947 0.102741220458 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0687774532639 0.0668466124924 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.457233926861 0.534860350844 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196476489289 0.148594505496 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123482423218 0.134430193775 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824111051229 0.0742795772207 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.250419143336 0.324371583561 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0243712130173 0.0638462369009 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239597561425 0.228012699653 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523499758633 0.058150111329 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
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Rates: 71.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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