some people said that milk tea is the best drink. Do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that milk tea is the best among all drinks. I would say that I strongly disagree. As it is undeniable that to youngsters, milk tea is quite a popular drink because of its deliciousness, but milk tea is full of toxic addictive ingredients that would be harmful to health.
On one hand, milk tea is refreshing and tasty, mostly suitable for everyone at any age. It is not difficult to find a place that sells milk tea on the street and milk tea is a potential solution when feeling thirsty as it is sweet and flavourful. Another reason why milk tea is popular is the “butterfly effect”, if all your friends like milk tea and drink it, you may also want to try it out.
On the other hand, drinking too much milk tea without doing exercise can cause severe problems to our health. Milk tea usually contains a considerable amount of sugar, fat, milk, tea, boba, and so many more unknown ingredients. That leads to drinking milk tea would also mean drinking chemicals and unsafe liquid into your body which could later on cause diabetes, high blood pressure, and other problems to our health. Moreover, buying milk tea can be costly as the average price for a cup of milk tea is 50000 VND.
In conclusion, although milk tea is popular for its tastiness, it is undeniable that it also is harmful to human health, so, to me, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages, therefore I strongly disagree.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62948207171 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64496228009 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549800796813 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2890139547 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.636363636 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8181818182 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319878543876 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143165665109 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624421062691 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201417216874 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757649231368 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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