Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Over the past decades, the advertisement has never failed to draw public attention and provoke debate. Although it is one of the good ways to get familiar with new products, the issue as to whether the marketing of products glamorous for people to purchase is in remains controversial. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.
On the other hand, whilst it is unarguable that the persuasive intent of advertisements can encourage people to buy more items than they really need. However, companies generally promulgate only its brighter side, thus providing an incomplete picture of the product. Herbal products and weight loss supplements are particular examples. According to recent research, the use of herbal products to weigh loss has seen a significant increase whereas health experts are showed that weight can only be controlled through proper diet and exercise.
On the other hand, individuals tend to buy more than required, especially when the imaginary images are so colorful and vividly projected like it is done in today's media. Additionally, advertising on relevant websites is an efficient way of raising customer awareness of your business. For instance, the younger love buying things online, which can save time and some money on travel, are constantly looking for a good online store, that has got wide a range of products and quick delivery.
In conclusion, I tend to agree that there are more advantages of marketing and advertisement if being used in the right direction of public awareness and safety, than their drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...t familiar with new products, the issue as to whether the marketing of products glamorous for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, thus, whereas, as to, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25196850394 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87106147374 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649606299213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2680306383 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.272727273 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178677216852 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058865276904 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448175687276 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967869471271 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016755203299 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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