Some people say advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say advertisement tells us about products that improve our life.
Which viewpoint do you agree with
Many people are of the opinion that advertising encourages us to purchase things that we don’t need. However, others believe that advertisement inform us about new products that may better our lives. Personally, I believe that without marketing and advertisement we would not be aware of some important products.
Some companies run lousy marketing campaigns just to pull a huge market. Many firms are aware of the fact that advertisement and packaging are very important tools in a market full of competitors. Such firms use multiple mediums and methods to advertise and put out their products to consumers. They run different adverts on televisions, radio, newspapers and social media platforms. They run this advertisement campaigns in very a very enticing and manipulative way, as a result of this even the most adamant customer has no choice but to be interested in the product even when they do not have immediate use for this products.
On the other hand, advertisement expose us to a world of products that are of very good use to our everyday life. For instance, there are some products that you actually had no idea that they existed until you saw and advert of this product. To sight a clear example, i have always had tough time to peel my potatoes and would spend hours just to peel 10 of them, till i saw an advert in the television of a potato peeler. I had no idea that this product even existed until i saw them on the television. This single item has made my life so much easier. I would not have seen this product if it was not for advertisement.
In conclusion, advertisement has made a lot of life easier by opening their eyes to amazing products, they would not have known existed if not for marketing campaigns on television, radio and social media platforms
- Some people say advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need Others say advertisement tells us about products that improve our life Which viewpoint do you agree with 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78387096774 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79334909518 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51935483871 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9282113391 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235285074875 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090127193103 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904542671639 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155351551161 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112194491171 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.