Advertisement has greatly succeeded in convincing humans on on which items to purchase a believe by some people while others argue that advert is now seen every where and people now ignore it. The purpose of this is to analyze both sides of the argument and then give my own perspective.
There are two major reasons why people believe that advertising have effect on what costumers buy. One of the main reason is,it allows them to know what is trendy. As people do not have much time to surf the internet or watch television due to their busy schedule they can easily see what they want to purchase through bill boards on the road while driving. As well as, knowing the current product that is on sales. For instance, someone that want to buy a particular phone could easily be influenced due to what he sees on advert thus, changes his mind to buy the one been advertised.This is as a result of the success advert had on him in purchasing the product.
However,the reasons why people ignore this advert these days is that,it could be boring. Because,this advertisement is constantly be aired and people are already used to it. Such as, the advertisement of how to get cheaper data bundles. More so,the way this advert interrupt what someone is doing could be very annoying. When people are extremely busy and do have a dead line to meet up with,the advert will just pop up and take some time to run. This can get people annoyed and sometimes frustrated. As a result, people just pretend and skip this avoidable advert when working to save time.
In conclusion,as advert influence how costumers buy their products such as, allowing them to know what is invoke and can easily help to make appropriate choice. Nevertheless,it is also ignored by people as the advert pop up at inappropriate time and this could be very frustrating.I completely agree that advertising greatly influence people in buying products as, it also allows them to make choice out of the numerous choices available.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77391304348 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67926137282 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8850130736 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.9375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184463045347 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670478028749 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488122271805 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125102984794 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032377645471 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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