In modern society, people argue that schools become unnecessary as children can study at home via the internet. Do you agree or disagree.
With civilization and technology advancement in our today's society,people think children can learn school work with the use of internet without attending proper class. In my opinion, i strongly disagree with this statement and this will be explained in essay discussion.
Children of these generation need to attend proper school because it will help them to develop good interpersonal relationships among colleagues. If children are allowed to study using online classes, they will not appreciate the importance of meeting new friends since they talk and relate with themselves alone at home. For instance,a child tutored online will find it a bit challenging to make friends free
In addition,allowing personal learning using internet makes
a child to spend most of his time stuffing the internet because some adverts which is above his age are displayed and not children friendly thus exposing him to some social deviants acts like internet fraud or online dating.
Furthermore,giving children the chance to study online will not allow parents to assesss academic performance of the children,as they don't have physical classmate they can complete with in examination . So most parents will believe that their children are smart intellectually . In conclusion ,I believe it is not advisable for the society to allow children to study using online classes because,it will not help to relate well with people and it will exposed them to what is beyond their age group.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35344827586 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98111767715 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60775862069 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0358223664 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.25 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165690955972 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776604585851 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485041740294 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887531263109 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286090438327 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.