Some people say all criminals should be locked up in prison, while others argue that there are better ways of punishing people
A growing number of people think that prison is the best punishment for criminals, whereas others believe that there are better alternatives to punish offenders. In this essay I will try to analyse both views before drawing up a conclusion.
On the one hand, there is a common belief that criminals have to be sentenced to jail for the crime which they have committed. The ward of prison is the most alternative choice to educate the guilty. Another common belief about prison is that offenders are made to be engaged with various professions and they are expected to carry on one of jobs that they have chosen after getting free. Most prisons in the USA experienced this method and somehow reached the result.
On the other hand, there are some people who believe that there are other penalties that can replace the prison. They claim they the best way to punish the guilty is obligate him to work the place where he has committed crime. For example, a shoplifter should be punished by working the shop where he stole something. There is also an alternative that getting them forfeit all rights and belongings they have. By executing these two penalties criminals are expected to behave themselves better than they would after jail sentencing.
In conclusion, prison penalty is found as a better choice than other executives by majority, while according to some people there are some other ways which are supposed to replace jail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'obligated'.
Suggestion: obligated
...ey the best way to punish the guilty is obligate him to work the place where he has comm...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90573770492 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47940658239 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553278688525 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8682782685 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325705537893 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109074138134 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954586616897 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209905048227 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08207413579 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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