some people say that animals should be kept in zoo, while others think that forest is best place for them?discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Animals are the sublime creation of nature. Animals should be kept safe in the zoo for their good preservation, while others assert that forest is the best place for animals to live. Here i would like to account for the both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold points to shore up the former view.First and foremost, as nowadays extinction among the animals is increasing day by day in the forests. To illustrate, as in the present era predators has being hunting the prey for the consumption of their food. As a result, the level of species is decreasing to the low abb. Moreover as zoos are made for proper rear and care of the animals. For instance, as proper medical facilities, feeding facilities are been provided to the animals in zoo, which results in the decreasing number of attacks among animals.
Further emphasizing on my point of view, setting up of the industries and factories in the remote areas near the water bodies is also responsible for hazardous environment. As the harmful smoke is exhausted out from the factories in the form of air pollution and water pollution in the rivers.Consequently, individuals may lead up for responsibility of damaging environment. Apart from this, accomodation for luxurious standard of living of people is also a talkative concern behind this phenomenon. As people axe down the trees to built up the houses, complexes, etcetera,that may lead to the deforestation and which may be dangerous for the living standard of people in environment.
There are conflicting views against this topic. Firstly, inspite the individuals, politicians can frame up the rules and regulations on the restriction of establishment of the factories and industries. Moreover, authorities can aware the people about the harmful threats that are being caused by the individuals by different purposes.
To recapitulate, individuals have grown up a serious impact for the destruction of environment rather than politicians. Degradation of environment is a worrying concern for the whole world. So, both individuals and politicians should share joint responsibilities to save the planet earth they inhabit.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'while', 'apart from', 'for instance', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.274869109948 0.247107183377 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.133507853403 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0732984293194 0.0946595960268 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0287958115183 0.0501214627716 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0130890052356 0.0437548338989 30% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.162303664921 0.122226691241 133% => OK
Participles: 0.0471204188482 0.0403226058552 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.20098441065 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0261780104712 0.0326793684256 80% => OK
Particles: 0.0183246073298 0.00163938923432 1118% => OK
Determiners: 0.11780104712 0.0861772015684 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.020942408377 0.021408717616 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0104712041885 0.011925033212 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2159.0 1933.35771543 112% => OK
No of words: 345.0 316.048096192 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.25797101449 6.12580529183 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365217391304 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.292753623188 0.28420135186 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.214492753623 0.203846283523 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.173913043478 0.137316102897 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20098441065 2.80594681477 114% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547826086957 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 59.6157539299 60.7387585426 98% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1666666667 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7214137818 49.517814964 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.944444444 127.492653851 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.814263465372 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 48.4420289855 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.76119402985 1.69124875643 163% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166001120566 0.332605444948 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109074900682 0.102741220458 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0751737728276 0.0668466124924 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.605989061315 0.534860350844 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148017785343 0.148594505496 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798072013174 0.134430193775 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859258457667 0.0742795772207 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.424395879078 0.324371583561 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0811935368872 0.0638462369009 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13268322585 0.228012699653 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976692618399 0.058150111329 168% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.4468937876 77% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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