Some people say that art is an essential subject and every child should learn it in school. Do you agree or disagree?
It is often argued that, arts is a necessary subject and each child should learn it in institute. I totally disagree with the statement because it is waste of time and the funding can be used on another social issues.
In every school art become an integral subject to teach which leads to total wastage of time. As art projects are too time-consuming and the time which student spend on these projects can utilise into another importance subjects. Because a student cannot choose high earning career in this field. If they want high profile job they have to focus on another parts of education rather than wasting their precious time on art. For example, the school assignments which are given to a student are of little marks but these projects take a lot of time in completion which can result lower scores in other subjects.
Secondly, art should not be funded alot by the government for education purposes. The spending should be utilised on other social matters or to enhance the living of residents of a nation. The government should prioritise the funds for the public instead of arts. People under poverty line need better infrastructure inspite of art museums, paintings. For instance, in many countries are statues of worth millions are made and the poverty rate of that countries are very high.
In conclusion, to teach art in schools as a mandatory subject is useless for the reason of time wastage and for better living funds can be used on the public needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oose high earning career in this field. If they want high profile job they have to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83464566929 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51806049992 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55905511811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6485490337 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4615384615 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178867430804 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700641642591 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713290296962 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114283061288 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375873664502 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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