some people say that art subjects such as music, drama, and creative writing are an essential part of education, and every school should include them in its syllabus. Do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give your opinion and examples of your own experience.
It is well said that 'today's students are the leaders of tomorrow. Presently, it is reckned by some masses that school must include art subjects such as drama, music, and many others in students academic study. Here, I would like to accord with the given statement.
Manifold points are there to support my point of view. First and foremost, students can not only reduce study stress but also amuse themselves by learning arts subjects. To illustrate, in school children face pressure of heavy subjects such as science, mathematics, and many other which distract their mind and they diminish interest towards study.Moreover, unlike other subjects, art subjects are easy to understand even a week student can learn the skill of drama, music, and creative writing with great efforts. Therefore, the idea of art subjects in study fully holds the water.
Further emphasising on my point of view. Through art subjects students can bright their future in many fields such as dancing, singing, acting, painting and many more. For example, students who are the owner of exceptional talent can polish their skills if school confer regular classes of art subjects. As a result, students can not only outshine the name of a country but also earn two square meal for family.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, heavy syllabus is imperative in this competitive world. However, still I believe that students can choose the best field for future if they gain knowledge of every subject.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14166666667 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58197544958 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620833333333 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.9117824373 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9230769231 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4615384615 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161546262214 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548271462246 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056765657679 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107610154488 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474708639605 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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