some people think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe that one can get information from the internet or books. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Presently, some masses are of the opinion that it is lucrative to accumulate knowledge or information from others. By contrast, some give more preference to internet or books for attaining information. Here, I would like to account both the view points with my own perception.
Manifold points are there to support the former view. First and foremost, some folks are the owner of exceptional knowledge and experience so they give more reliable information to others. To illustrate, knowledgeable people face many circumstances in life and achieve everything with practical experience. Therefore, they can give valuable information to others. Apart from it, online information always not reliable. For example, the owner of distinct web sites exaggerate the information for personal temptation and gain people faith with fake information. Further, people have to spend hefty amount of time and money in order to search information through books. Thus, it is fruitful to taking advice from others for information rather than uings books or internet.
On the other side, others have conflicting views.
To begin with, information through internet is better and useful. Taking a real life example, during my preparation for Ilets exam.i was worried about writing module.despite the help of my tutors I was unable to understand the structure of writing. One day I was searching information on YouTube and watching videos of Ryan who is prominent for writing module. With the help of Ryan vedios I got ample of ideas about writing as well as followed his advice about the structure.So, getting information with the help of internet is beneficial.what is more, people have limited knowledge about everything but people get distinct types of information through internet where different experts share ideas with different ways.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, both have their own significance. However, still I believe that people must take advice from others for information.
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| 2021-09-30 | Amrit Randhawa | 43 | view |
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- Nowadays people try to balance their life and work with other things in life, but actually some could achieve it so far, what are the reasons for this. how can be solve this problem. 56
- some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food others however think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility discuss both views and give your own opinion 58
- Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports what are the reason for this it is a negative or positive development 69
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'take'?
Suggestion: take
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...followed his advice about the structure.So, getting information with the help of i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for example, as well as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46078431373 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99688882777 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 70.0194197048 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367357330092 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114804562553 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065398319682 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203534036791 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483628988526 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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