Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required
In recent days public health has become a global issue. People often argue that providing ample opportunities to access sport facilities can enhance public health. However, some others are arguing that this is not the only solution, instead a little extra effort is needed for this general issue. In my opinion, I personally agree with the latter perspective and this essay will analyze both sides along with my view.
First of all, health is one of the key factors in human lives. Although having ample benefits with the usage of technology, people are habituating to do desk jobs rather than walking or moving. The increase in the number of sports clubs can motivate people to focus on their health status in their busy lives. Moreover, these sports clubs will provide various equipment such as swimming, a spacious playground, weights and many more which enable the public to make use of these to maintain fitness. For example, in South Korea gyms and sports centers are located every five-kilometers which aid people to stay healthy and fit.
On the other hand, it is often believed that building such centers will not improve the public health in the entire nation, while these centers need some promotions and advertisements in order to reach more people. Additionally, state and local governments should promote campaigns for raising awareness among the citizens regarding proper exercise and healthy diet. For instance, Canada being one of the developed nations, the government launched health awareness months, days and weeks to keep an eye on public health. As an outcome, the life expectancy rate increased gradually.
To recapitulate, although it is certainly true that these centers can attract more people to make use of these services, a few people gainsay that a large number of sports centers might not be the complete solution to public health issues. In my opinion, governments should take appropriate measures to promote these clubs via advertisements and launching educational or awareness programs to reach more people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23333333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64257193082 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0275140884 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.133333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285891452722 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922946590138 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063905994498 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171029283141 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441029169202 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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