Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, staying healthy is a crucial concern for everyone. Some would argue that in order to boost the health of the public, expanding the number of sports amenities is the most appropriate way while others think it could not be enough. In my opinion, I believe improving the public’s health is a complicated problem that can not be solved by any single strategy.
On the one hand, making a rise in sports facilities might be a good point to start but it will have no effect if there is a lack of other aspects such as time for exercise and motivation. First of all, gyms and equipment are for nothing if people have no time to practice or go to the gym. Moreover, doing exercise is a daily life process and a long-term plan what requires us to keep our motivation and doing it every day. For instance, over 60% of 21 - 26 years old people who do workout less than 2 times per week and most of them have the excuse that they have other works to do and losing their interest in practicing. Thus, we need solutions to help people have more time and exercise habits instead of just proving them the facilities which might not be used.
On the other hand, there are various factors that affect people’s health such as reducing stress at work, a healthy diet, or a proper exercise plan. In fact, having too much pressure at the working place could put people in some dangerous mental conditions. In addition, losing control of eating unhealthy foods could bring lots of problems to our hearts and our body. More than that, improper practice strategy could cause exercise injury for example muscle pull or sprained ankle. Because of those reasons, many aspects are needed in making public health better.
To sum up, I believe people’s health could not be improved by increasing sports facilities as the only solution while other strategies are needed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in fact, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69418960245 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42023056495 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599388379205 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1672607862 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.642857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251400956202 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849568046078 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744243794919 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171685454709 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544138976304 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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