Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Health is the most important aspect of human life. In this fast pace world, many people are concerned about their body and look for ways to keep themselves fit. There are many ways to achieve this, mainly by indulging themselves in some kind of physical activities like gym and sports. Some people are of the opine that the best way to improve their health is by building more sports facilities, while others believe that this may not be an effective option. I agree with the latter opinion. Nevertheless, this essay aims at discussing both the perspectives.
On one hand, rise in sports arena would mean more people participating in such clubs. There are equipped with a numerous games ranging from indoor to outdoor. This would attract people to play, which in turn would facilitate their health. Moreover, with the population growing there is hardly any open space left outside to pursue any physical activity. Reserving some area in this form would be the best option. For instance, one of my friend Natalie resides in a busy neighbourhood and always complained about the fact that she is not getting enough physical activity due to which she had developed many health issues, fortunately a sports club opened nearby which she regularly visited and as a matter a fact she feels much salubrious now.
On the other hand, there are several factors inter-wined that weigh in when we talk about becoming healthy like the food, habits and of course the nature of the body. With the one sports facility coming into existence, it may not make a huge difference. For instance, a person who is visiting the sports centre on regular basis but do not maintain a proper diet and eats junk food might not see any effective changes rather this would lead to detrimental effects. Likewise, if people over do any activity this can cause muscle cramp or injury. The amount and timing of practising these activities are among the other factors that play a vital role.
In conclusion, sports facilities are just a small part that contribute to one’s health, but not entirely dependent on its existence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89325842697 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51343442465 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598314606742 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4011632635 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7777777778 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27777777778 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249659570667 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755874083374 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631592006133 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146054403885 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557855806095 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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