Health is an important part of any person as an individual and in the society. Some individauals have the opinion that increasing the number of sports centres will be one of the most effective method to improve health of the public. Still there are people who believes that sports activities only produce little effects and there are number of different measures to be considered for improving public health effectively. Eventhough i will explains both thses opinions, I think sports centres are just one aspect to improve public health and there are a lot of other fields which needs improvements.
On the one hand health of an individual is dependent on exercise, sporting activities are just one way to do it. The highlight of sports is that people are getting a chance to do something they love or passionate about. which will make the health maintanance something joyful. For example, I had joined a gym to reduce my weight but, the atnosphere there was really stressfull for me and i dropped it without completing a month. Later i started palying badminton with my friends at a nearby sports centre every evening. Although i used to play a set or so, i was very much involved into it and gradually started lossing weight an become fit
On the other hand, to maintain health one needs to make changes in his eating habits life styles along with exercise. The number of fastfood restaurants are increasing rapidly and people especially younger children and working couples are really behind it. Along with this eating time has changed due to buzy schedules resulting in skipping meals especially breakfast . This will leads our body switching into stravation mode and releasing stress hormone which are detrimental to health. For those who are not interested in sports can steps into gyms for their daily workouts where trainers are available to help and monitor our exercise.
To sumup, I have the opinion that ,sports centres play a role in public health improvements but the most important ones are improving healthy eating habits any type of exercise facilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, still, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99135446686 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65272066732 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559077809798 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8698434201 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.466666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306744341176 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103633251785 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958065054047 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195572194114 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111902720477 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.