Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that protecting public health is important . Some people believe that to support public health sport clubs should offer more facilities, while others think that there are alternative methods. In my opinion, i believe that plenty kind of ways are there.
On the one hand, rising sport facilities is key factor. Absolutely, physical activity is crucial to aid health system. Firstly, if sport clubs will order more facilities, many people can belong physical activity. In this way, human health system would be able to enhanced. However, as without payment, it seems to be nugatory for people because they do not pay much money. Secondly, by contrast, there are people who could improve their health by using these facilities including membership facilities, beginner facilities, children so on. That is why this way is elemental.
On the other hand, I believe that human would use other approach to live healthy. For instance, one of the most significant way is eating organic, quality and fresh food such as kind of meat, fruits, vegetables, beverages because our body health depend on directly what we eat. If people ate junk food frequently, they would expose some disease. To illustrate, heart disease, hypertension, diabetes in addition to nowadays, people should try to avoid stress which comes from their job, personal life anything because scientists have demonstrated that stress will affect negatively our health. Hence, in order to reduce stress level, they have to do eat healthy food, listen good music and drink cup of coffee with sweet smell.
To conclude, i agree that there are many kind of way to stay healthy. Thus, people should choose convenient method for yourself.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, kind of, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19133574007 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54304081182 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635379061372 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.7055162302 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5882352941 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268396082839 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830266659682 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564789711089 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154604519033 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793275808507 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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