Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports felicities. Others, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Whether sports facilities are good scale to reform the public health or not is a question that requires careful consideration. In this controversial subject, I deal with this issue and answer the question that are these improvement in sport enough or need more key roles.
As it mentioned, there are squadron of people or researcher are believing that swelling the number of sport complex is the key of these problems. Moreover, they insist the majority of public health and diseases are caused by lack motivated activities. Because of the new devised equipment, people devote insufficient time on some responsibilities while in past they faced with. On this occasion, by enhancing acknowledgment of this problems and male some motivation for them and also push them to excel we can have in healthier society.
On the other case, rest of the people and I believe that soaring the sport facilities are not ascertainable factors to the health's people. In addition, it need more facilities besides the sports to complete this puzzle like some entertainments. Nonetheless of previous out view, our society faced with different problems in any subject that you think. Maybe on of those can be the lack of sufficient sport's facilities. A part from that, it can not be deniable the role of parents to give their children adequate information and also the educational system. Social media have also played an important role for public health.
In the conclusion, I should add some points besides the mentioned suggestion. At first, we have to analyze the economy of the society which this solution carried out. Secondly, the capability of mental and physical for each member of the country should be measured.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11071428571 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88327115461 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582142857143 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7955243436 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.4 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23999975477 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733517440656 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466831387673 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136921636063 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528491823413 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.