Some people say that best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say this would have little effect on public health and that other Measures are required.
Discuss both view and give your opinion
There is no denying that popularity of rising various new games among the public is increasing day by day with the motto of improving general people health. It is often argued that this is a positive development, whilst other disagree and think that sport facilities is not the one measure as well; some other factors too should be consider to improve public health. This essay agrees that an increase in sports services helps people to live hygienic and balanced life. This essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that sports provides a sorts of entertainment and fun in human life along with fulfilling physical exercise required by body to remain fit. Moreover, though the help of games people will forget pain and struggle that they have to do in gym inorder to be healthy. It is therefore agreed that sports is very worthy for people to improve their health standard. For example, if there will be an easy access to games people would more likely to do regular exercise rather than just collapsing the time by sitting in front of screen.
However, many disagree and feel that increasing number of sports may able to create little effects on public health as all people are not interested in games. They might found games boring and at that time other factors like proper balanced diet plan, drinking plenty of water throughout the day should be implemented among people. Despite this, all the factors should be consider along with games to enhance public health and this essay disagrees sports should be minimized and other measures should be consider. For instance, this is most evident in my country that nowadays huge number of people are organizing various game in their communities to be healthy.
In conclusion, while the benefits of games leads people to easily meet the exercise needs simply whereas sometime it may have little effects on public health and people have to move towards Yoga and other activities. At last, I personally think that games are the best measures for improving people life without doubt.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91040462428 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36215589673 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528901734104 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6582804257 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.357142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321005921634 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12023149161 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077273885825 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209734929665 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748657861444 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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