Some people say computer games are bad for children in every way and some others say it has disadvantages in development of a child. Discuss both aspects and give your own opinion
some argue that computer games are detrimental in terms of all views, while some extol their virtues in children’s growth. In my opinion, both mentioned ideas are correct to some extends.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that computer games can benefit users in particular fields. First of all, besides the first purpose of entertaining and reducing pressure, these games also bring values to skills. when playing computer games, children can enhance their potential of becoming successful problem-solvers thanks to multiple challenging tasks of the games. therefore, consumers can give themselves a better life of not only relaxation but broadened minds as well. Moreover, online game is also a perfect place to make new friends coming from all over the world. League of Legend - the most popular computer game nowadays is a prime example. this game not only underpins making new friends through online matches but also organizes professional events for users to meet in person.
On the other hand, despite practical advantages, computer games still have a range of drawbacks that seem difficult to deal with. initially, when players become addicted to this leisure activity, they may spend hours sitting in front of the computer screens, which is detrimental to their health. Regarding physical health, sitting for a long time and radiation from electronic devices can cause severe diseases such as weak eyesight, backache and insomnia. besides, in terms of the mental one, wasting too much time on computer games can also lead to a lack of time to finish work may be poor academic performance. All of which perhaps put more pressure and stress on users instead of solving them. In addition, the fact that adult games are played uncontrollably by children under 18 is an alarming concern. Because of lack of awareness in ages, these types of game can give rise to violence and risk in children. For instance, the game Blue Whale, which makes many children suicide due to the dangerous challenges of the game, cost authorities a lot of effort and money to address this.
In conclusion, computer game is not a harmful inventor, it all depends on the way and purpose of users. Therefore, becoming a smart player to gain benefits instead of damaging yourself with games.
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- Some people say computer games are bad for children in every way and some others say it has disadvantages in development of a child Discuss both aspects and give your own opinion 89
- Some people say computer games are bad for children in every way and some others say it has disadvantages in development of a child Discuss both aspects and give your own opinion 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1907.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09893048128 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66779975927 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601604278075 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3206984211 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.368421053 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7368421053 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197475501562 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620783822564 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500715366259 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134881420871 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691037840501 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.