Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace
traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Now a days technology create new world we can see that after 2000 technology are increase.
As we talk about the ebooks is online reading and gives extra new information with video and many more
but in the past year newspaper and magazines was going on and now a days also we see that the many
people prefer to read newspaper so we can say that both are equal uses.
To begin with technology that in modern days technology is use as like communication e-book and
many more.let use see that 19% of people are using e-book but the competition of<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="but "></span> newspaper and
magazines are upper in 39% so it’s a BIG DIFFERENCE and people are already connected seems old age
and now on words also people of their generation are follow the ready habit of news;paper and
magazines .But coming future after 2020 new attract toward technology and cut the percentage
of newspaper reading because in many school government announce to every schools and collages that
use e technology like tablet and computers are used in schools and collages so we can say that
newspaper is more suitable as compare to technology of ebooks .
On the other hand , we can say that technology can grab the world and humans mind so they all are
attracted towards technology and ebooks are increase in coming future and make a market of e-book
reading all theme is available in one same like newspaper but some more thing included in this is video
will be available and current news day by day u will get on time .
To end , the new world people drastically affected towards advance technology yet,in my opinion, I
can say that see for that present things because future can be predicated but present cannot so we can say
that existence of traditional newspaper and magazines are to be continue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days technology create new world we can see ...
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Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
Now a days technology create new world we can see ...
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...ewspaper and magazines was going on and now a days also we see that the many people prefe...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...aper and magazines was going on and now a days also we see that the many people prefe...
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Line 6, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...To begin with technology that in modern days technology is use as like communication...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'followed'.
Suggestion: followed
...rds also people of their generation are follow the ready habit of news;paper and maga...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ready habit of news;paper and magazines .But coming future after 2020 new attract...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ady habit of news;paper and magazines .But coming future after 2020 new attract to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r 2020 new attract toward technology and cut the percentage of newspaper reading...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...table as compare to technology of ebooks . On the other hand , we can say that ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hnology of ebooks . On the other hand , we can say that technology can grab the...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rrent news day by day u will get on time . To end , the new world people drastica...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... day by day u will get on time . To end , the new world people drastically affect...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
... affected towards advance technology yet,in my opinion, I can say that see for tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9392971246 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17686446552 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479233226837 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 243.307706413 49.4020404114 493% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 309.2 106.682146367 290% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.6 20.7667163134 301% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.2 7.06120827912 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217429488224 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12300302263 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391958099238 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758392393418 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355678804364 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 13.0946893788 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.55 50.2224549098 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.26 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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