Some people say economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world. Others say that economic growth should be stop immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
In the recent years, rapidly booming uplift of economy is gaining a great deal of attention throughout the globe. Most importantly, it has been a bone of contention among the critics about its impact in the world. While some people feel that it has several downsides on environment, I would contend that it has multifarious benefits too. Here, both sides of my assertion will be scrutinized with my proper verdict at last.
To commence with, poverty has been a significant issue among many nations by illiteracy, lack of infrastructure and economic progress. Apparently, if a nation encourages on economic growth it can enable high standard of living with adequate job opportunities for people to meet their basic need and improve incentives for parents to invest in their children’s education by sending them to school. Consequently, this will lead to growth in entrepreneurs with pressure on good governance. Additionally, economic growth during the Twentieth Century was a major reason in reducing absolute levels of poverty and enabling a rise in life expectancy.
Nevertheless, despite of its many benefits commercial development can have irreversible impact on environment. For instance, future growth cannot be done without environmental sustainability however, the rate of economic growth is increasing on increase in quantity and quality of natural resources like fossil fuels, valuable metal and wildlife. To illustrate, excessive use of fossil fuels in industries and automobiles releases more carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases, making them the primary contributor to global warming and climate change.
To conclude, as I aforementioned economic growth has a deleterious influence on environment ,however it is required for to eradicate poverty and improve nation’s economy. In my opinion, future economic growth scheme with emphasis on sustainable nature can transfer the world into a happier place.
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree with 73
- Some people say economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world. Others say that economic growth should be stop immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s a deleterious influence on environment ,however it is required for to eradicate ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62585034014 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20640793982 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646258503401 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1391998577 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.230769231 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218701497831 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682594304519 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389970946056 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12339017642 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224678008902 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.67 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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