People are divided on the issue of allocation of funds by government. Some opine that health care is a crucial facet that government have to pay attention to while, others believe that there are exist other areas on which government should attach equal weight. This essay intends to discuss both views. I, however, side with latter view.
On the one hand, by investing funds on medical sevices by government would be beneficial to make the society more happy and healthier. It would be not only convenient and cost-effective for the public to see a doctor but also reduce the burden on the country's residents. For example, the financial support from government is likely to make various treatments and medicines are more affordable for impoverish society which can be useful in contriolling diseases.
On the other hand, there are some other social issues which can not be neglected in the attention span of government's investment. Firstly, Education is the most important aspect for each and everyone. So, government should allot similar funds to promote this area. The funds can be utilize by government to allow free education in primary schools and grant subsidies to the students for their higher education.
Secondly, public transport should be improved so that majority of individuals opt to it and the conditions of roads should be bettered. Thirdly, government's collected money should be distributed to public facilities which will not only improve the condition of citizens but also generate alot of job opporunities. It will make the economy more stable.
To sum up, medical services are important as like other sectors but government should pay attention to all other fields and the funds should equally go to each sector.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17314487633 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73903334904 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558303886926 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8607935293 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196034710577 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657374052995 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526409185118 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118049018282 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669573861832 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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