It is a common belief that the government should invest more time in elderly people with their health. However, there is another argument that education of our young generation which is the main workforce in the future ought to be put high values on.
On the one hand, taking care of elderly citizens gives them feeling of love. They used to spend their whole life studying and working hard to earn for a living ,lead their children’s life better and also devoting all of their abilities for their country. Therefore, the time after retiring is the best time for them to enjoy many meaningful values of life, receive love from others and social welfare from the government.
Nevertheless, educational care for the young in such a modern society like now is more imperative than ever before. Firstly, it is not worthless to give financial advocate for the major workforce which is one of the most essential elements contributing to the development of a country. Moreover, young generation is currently quite creative and absolutely crazy about learning something new to widen their knowledge,. Therefore, if the authority has enough appropriate policy and invest in education to exploit the young people’s abilities, there will be more opportunities for creating accurate policies stimulating the national economic growth.
In conclusion, while it is undeniable that education of the young is actually needed for developing the economic, we still can’t ignore the obligation to looking after the old.
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- Some people say that the government should spend more money taking care of elderly people while others think that government spending should be spent more on the education of young people Discuss and give an opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24279835391 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78492906624 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5893179095 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.4 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223261270997 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866805741962 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818042706661 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128404314523 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749248783603 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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