According to the opinion of some people, History is one of the most significant school subjects. Other people think that nowadays, scientific and technological subjects are more vital than history subjects.
A lot of subjects are studied by pupils in school. All sciences play an important role in children's life. History is one of the relevant subjects for pupils. National history and the world subjects are taught in school. This subject can give useful information to children about ancient times. In this process, schoolboys and schoolgirls can learn about ancient laws, inventions and cultures of their country and other countries. When pupils get knowledge in historical subjects, they can improve their thinking capacity. Because, they can compare nowadays and ancient times. This course can develop their reasoning.
In above thoughts, we can say that history subjects play important role in our life but some people disagree with this idea. They think science and technological subjects are more relevant than history. Because, many discoveries depend on science. Therefore, children need to study more technological and science subjects. These subjects can assist to prepare scientists but we should not forget that the basic of technological subjects were created in the period of ancient times. Therefore, historical knowledge is obligatory for us.
In my opinion, science and technological subjects are vital for pupils but they have to learn history. Because, this subject can help them to improve their outlook. Besides, historical eruditions can facilitate to make new inventions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0599078341 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40032215315 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566820276498 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.965320349 49.4020404114 302% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 219.166666667 106.682146367 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.1666666667 20.7667163134 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34671190275 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189100708874 0.084324248473 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130199228598 0.0667982634062 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240055742224 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878617242095 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.02 50.2224549098 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.46 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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