It is a given fact that every child is different from others. Therefore, their ability to retain the knowledge is also dissimilar. Some humans endorse that the history is most emimence in every education centre. However, others assert that technology and science is more crucial than history. Whichever, the way is one thing which is essential is to keeep them occupied into something productive.
In order to accomplish this task, history helps young scholars to understand their culture and gives them identity. To make it more engaging, history play a vital character in learners life. This is because, they can acquire about culture and country have evolved over the centuries from studying history. However, if we read history pf last century, there is lot of variations as compare to past. Consequently, I assert history is an emimence way for applicants to remember the past and discover their cultural identities.
On the contrary, there is a popular belief that science and technology ar most significant subject. Due to this modern era, technology is crucial for everyone. Which is true to some extent as in the pendamic, technology play a essential role to do work online. People do work at home. It is convenient for everyone. Mostly students like to do better in future to choose good subject who are help to achieve their goals. for example, they can easily to get their dream job with the help to technology.
To encapsulate, I firmly assert that every subject have their own importance but nowadays no one can focus on history because they do not like to read old culture things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whichever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ent as in the pendamic, technology play a essential role to do work online. Peopl...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...better in future to choose good subject who are help to achieve their goals. for exampl...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96641791045 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66133204203 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585820895522 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4701359424 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9444444444 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238861250207 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659867868978 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590176123536 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137983139493 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239519669456 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.95 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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