A few people argued that, gaining a knowledge of history is not salient whereas, it's a waste of efforts to learn.
As far as I am concerned , to study any subject reliance on one's point of interest.
However, the field of history is equally fascinating to study like other subjects , even though one should have sufficient convergence about the historical aspects.
On the one hand, it is considered that studying history is not fruitful and its misuse of time spent on it.
But , i completely hostile from this people's perspective. History is the platform which plays a vital role in anyone's life to perceived about historical culture of any country and its origin , their science and medical developments that has happened in the past. Also ,their inventions ,historical creativity and sedentary lifestyle of ancient people. In other words, a good read about history is that ,History helps people to understand their ethics ,country importance ,cultural fundamentals in a better way and give close opportunity to learn the facts about the country/globe to which one belongs.By learning history, people get clear vision of success and failures , innovations and technological differences evolved in last decades and how presently things developed and facilitating one's life.
On the other hand, gaining knowledge of history up to certain level is levergant, but is not essential to learn it or touted it to study.History is the study of ancient things, past events and activities.
To know about relevant facts is good enough for someone. Furthermore, Over the time things get restructured, redeveloped and reformed in most better way so it’s not essential to make prominent the study of history. It's worthless from future perspective. History's gained learning is invaluable in fast running science and technological world because it doesn't incorporates anywhere people's everyday life. Thus it's relevant to relent the study of history and gravitates to science and technology.
To summarize, it’s good to bring-u the knowledge of history up to some extent and it would be value added to his or her skill set, but it's not completely useful in putting time for something which is not beneficial.
- Some people think that technology has made our life too complex. However, other people think that it has made our life easier. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- some people say that history subject the waste of time of student. But other believe that history subject is the best way to know about past. Discuss both side and give your opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Suggestion: History
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, whereas, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26031746032 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03325549864 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568253968254 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.591477451 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.636363636 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6363636364 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.54545454545 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249745437827 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834425606427 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04824882744 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966564832956 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419304633199 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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