Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns
and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, the reconstruction for planting and erecting more houses in the remote areas and urban have become a controversial issue. In my opinion, I concur that trees and also gardens play paramount importance in civilization. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall propose my point of view and give supporting reasons.
To begin with, the cultivation of more trees in city settings is advantageous to residential’s housing in a variety of ways. Take an example as shading of trees is generated when more trees are planted in this area. Additionally, it does not also raise the city's aesthetics but also helps to lower the temperature. Tangibly, it could provide more space for many people of any group of ages such as adolescents and elders to blow off some steam, do some physical activities or take a stroll with their pets in this relaxing environment.
Furthermore, these plants take a responsibility to assist in reducing urban air pollution, noise levels, drought, floods e.g.Thus it could promote higher living standards, some experts have concluded that tree leaves absorbed much carbon dioxide and dust. Moreover, thanks to these tree features that insects and some animals could use them for ingestion. In addition, it is the fact that trees generate oxygen, which can help to reduce pollution and is a necessary thing that people could not live without. However, it is evitable that more housing means more places to live, it cannot be ignored that in urbanization people tend to be affected by air pollution. So, the optimal solution is to protect and grow more trees in the open spaces.
To sum up, due to mass migration, the need for trees and gardens must be considered to be the first and optimal solution to improve the quality of life in overcrowded cities. Additionally, the trees planted are proportional to the human life cycle. So, growing more trees is extremely necessary for the current days.
- Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in addition, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99690402477 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84955551692 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585139318885 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5708876163 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.6 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289454962252 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969359459948 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057016399271 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166711088338 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622765469922 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.