Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
some people believe that the most serious problem of environment is the extinction of many species of creatures and plants while some others think that there are more important environment issues. This essay will discuss both these views but personally I am convinced that we should pay attention to some others problem than the disappear of plants and animals.
there are several reason why the loss of particular species of creatures is serious. The first and the major reason is some animals or plants extinct will harm to the balance of our environment. For instance, one animals disappear will lead to the extinction of another because, their benefit related to each other. take bee is a pride example, if bee extinct, there are many plants won’t have flowers and they can’ transfer flowers to fruits. Moreover, the loss of creatures will make people cannot to see them face to face again. some animals or plants disappear before we understand or research so that we lost many information about them.
Despite of those above arguments, I argue that we have too many problems to consider than the loss of plants and animals. first of all, some others issue are tend to be more serious and required the effectively solutions as soon as possible. For example, climate change or global warming are directly threat to human life and we need take action to overcome them. Furthermore, if we can stop climate change and global warming is mean we are protecting the environment and contribute to reduce the extinction of many animals and plants. another strong point is the disappear of one particularly creatures will lead to the appear of the new one. Due to the natural evolution, when an animals or plants extinction , some others will born or change themselves to adapt such as if dinosaurs weren’t disappear , human will never appear.
In conclusion, although the loss of animals and plant is one of the hot issues to debate, I am strongly convinced that , we need to concentrate to other problems. However, governments and residents on the world should figure out measurements to overcome those problems together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02535211268 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68301869309 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498591549296 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4785379012 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21628836383 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757074346783 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655520072067 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150818042742 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819513784752 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.