Some individuals are of the opinion that the major environmental issue is the disappearance of plants and animals while others believe that there are more threat causes to the environment. This essay will be discussed from a different viewpoint.
First and foremost, a variety of species of animals and plants have come to extinction because wildlife habitats are being destroyed by illegal hunters and farmers. For the hunters, they have been hunting for rare animals for selling the merchants at a high price. For instance, the cheetah has been targeted to sell leathers in black markets. Besides that, forests are being cut down by the farmers to expand the agricultural land and giant cattle. As a result, this will lead to an uncontrollable increase in the number of extinction and the ecosystem face the verge of danger.
On the other hand, many people believe that other difficulties besides the disappearance of wildlife. This is caused by many factors such as air pollution. Air pollution is caused by the exhaust of car emissions, factories, dust. Moreover, air pollution can lead to the consequences is the poisonous atmosphere, thus, facing the risk of reduction in plants, trees, and forests. Besides that, fossil fuels like oil and gas are running out because of the excessive use of fuel and petrol, leading to raising the earth’s temperature and sea level rises which can be catastrophic for the world.
In conclusion, the extinction of wildlife and the loss of biodiversity are crucial issues. Nevertheless, other issues such as climate change or the run-out of fossil fuels are inevitable. In my opinion, we should have conclusions about all issues because they all threaten the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1541218638 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86117607664 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5014529683 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116398074513 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0371200175867 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660439715546 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868533657369 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850884737394 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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