Some individuals are of the opinion that holding a global sports event is beneficial for the country, while some people believe that it has a negative effect. Both opinions have a great significance in equal measure and I will elaborate on this essay.
On the one hand, there are a variety of benefits of holding an international sports event. Firstly, it will promote tourism. The host country will become the center of attention and these events will bring prestige and honour to the country. This will attract numerous visitors and sports lovers to the host country. Secondly, it provides a tremendous boost for the improvement of infrastructure in the city where the event is hosted, such as road facilities, hotels, communication facilities. Besides, it will provide the impetus for the growth of sports.
On the other hand, there are still great challenges for hosting sports events. Firstly, it will take the government a lot of time to upgrade the sporting facilities and the construction of the place. Moreover, the government will incur gigantic debt and losses from the budget when organizing big sports events such as World Cup or Sea Games. Secondly, there could happen unexpected incidents such as terror attacks and the host country may take the responsibility for this.
In conclusion, although there are some downsides when holding the international event, I endorse the view that there is a major opportunity to boost the image in front of the global.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 59, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11157024793 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81236220815 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557851239669 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5693013906 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1538461538 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294666722207 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967149124196 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935796020308 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184521114828 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892865683836 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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