The extinction of many creators in nature could be considered as an important environmental issue for many people however some crucial problems are the keys leading to habitat alteration not only causing the mass disappearance but also the negative impacts all over the world.
One of the biggest trouble in the world is pollution- in air, water and soil, etc. since industry and agriculture activities. It began with the misuse of materials, waste, and consumerism lead to the overexploited and usage of things unnecessarily then turn to trash quickly. Contribution to the redundancy of industry, like carbon dioxide, other toxic gases, and the pollutants which pour into the river and the sea, diminish the habitat of a large amount of terrestrial and aquatic animals alongside with the excess emission of gases causes the global warming and sea-level rise threaten the life of million people.
Deforestation meanwhile has become an environmental problem that cannot be ignored in the past few decades. Besides the legal logging, many people and organizations prefer to illegally damage forests to collect wood and lands for industry construction and farming. This leads to the loss of habitats of many species especially in the tropical countries where own great biological diversity, which also becomes dangerous. For example, the tiger can be extinct in the natural environment in Vietnam since it is reported that there been a long time people have not seen any tiger footprint or the carcass of an animal eaten by them, even in the National Park. Tiger’s case in Vietnam is just a specific case in a million among the countries about the sweeping effects of deforestation also environmental issues going on over the world.
It is necessary to verify the huge impact of the environmental concerns on human life, not only the creatures’ disappearance but also more than that. The environmental issues are unavoidable because of human unwise activities in the past, so which people are recommended to is focus on today and every time they prefer to buy anything new, they ought to remind about three R symbols- reduces, reuse and recycle. The big change comes from the accumulation of vast small changes.
- The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010 73
- The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The chart below show the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main f 89
- Road access to a city hospital 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17222222222 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88629691413 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613888888889 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.7457736636 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.230769231 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134414763025 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381310908275 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345772577124 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755697600314 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03487829256 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.