Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is believed by some people that extinction of specific species of plants and animals is the vital environmental problem of our time. While, others opine that there are other environmental problems which are more crucial. In my opinion, I agree with the latter point of view.
On the one hand, people who argue that extinction of plant and animal species is the most important environmental problem think that it will disturb the ecological life cycle which makes human survival difficult. If a particular plant or animal species faces extinction, then other species which are dependent on that specific species for food will also become extinct. As a result, humans cannot find their food in future if species become extinct after another. Also, weather gets impacted if more tree species get extinct.
On the other hand, people who think that there are some environmental problems which are important argue that these problems affect the health of most of the living species in the world. These problems can make survival of the future generations difficult. These problems include environmental pollution of an air and water, global warming. Species which breath this polluted air on which consume polluted water suffer from many health issues. Also, the temperature is increasing in this world which can melt the ice bergs and cause floods. This can also increase carbondioxide content and reduce the amount of oxygen which is vital for the survival of humans and animals.
In conclusion, though some people believe that extinction of specific plant and animal species is the major environmental problem, global warming and environmental pollution are the most important environmental problems as they pose more threat compared to the former one.
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- IELTS 8 Test 3 Writing Task 1
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ital environmental problem of our time. While, others opine that there are other envi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29181494662 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65409338559 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494661921708 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.944940022 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368605840052 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145737273648 0.084324248473 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123089517197 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282332341337 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101490522095 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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