Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The debate reads whether the current cornerstone of the environmental issues is the threat posing biosystem or there are other all-important problems that ought to be squelched. From my perspective, both views of the motions deem significant in their argument.
In the first view, there is no denying that flora and fauna served as the precursor to the perennial of survival for the ecosystem, humans included. The phenomenon aroused that there is an inevitable unflagging array of species on the verge of extinction heaps pressure upon the loss of natural resources. it can be without saying that human survival hinges profoundly on consuming what nature vouchsafes: the meat we eat, the paddle field we farm on, and the pharmaceuticals from precious plants to cure diseases. Therefore, homosapiens, the civilized creatures reckoning the dependence, have the occasion to preserve and mitigate their impacts on. Effectively, all-out efforts are being made, from individuals to authorized organizations, to tackle current affairs.
Bitter-sweet as it may taste, concerns were raised about if we are overstepping the mark by devoting too much to plants and animals and forgetting other predicaments such as pollution, and nuclear powers. In essence, they are all intertwined with each other, creating an arrow-down map of influences. As a result, attempts to address one pillar will affect the other. For instance, less urbanization means less pollution, which also means less natural land taken. Policy-makers are to deal with the issues in a non-biased mannerism. This will enhance a bulwark for all aspects of environmental issues to be resolved.
In conclusion, plants and animals are, without a shadow of a doubt, under great threat. However, it is of importance that human should recognize other lurking problems to be solved in tandem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40830449827 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06818386509 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636678200692 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7236141276 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.2 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162543701793 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462696069848 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374864089563 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101142536505 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031985528076 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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