"Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion."
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In today's era, various environmental problems are encountered which are caused by more than one source. Extinction of certain species of plants and animals is one of them. Although it cannot be considered as a main environmental issue.
It can be understood that there are a variety of plants and animals which used to contribute to the natural habitat in the ancient times have become extinct in today's world. One of them to mention, are Mammoths who lived in extremely cold climate during ice age. Alongside them, various plants having medicinal use have become extremely rare to find forcing use to find alternative medical solutions.
Although these problems can be a threat to the biodiversity there are certain alarming issues that need to be dealt with on priority. One of such danger is of Global Warming. Today, the emissions of greenhouse gases reach a peak due to extensive use of automobiles, industries, and various electrical appliances. It won't be false to say that overall advancement in technology is having a side effect on the environment which is a main concern. Rising sea levels, deforestation, pollution is some of the growing concerns for humanity.
All in all, although the loss of biodiversity can be of some concern, I feel that there are more alarming issues at hand that need immediate attention in order for humanity to survive the next century. If these issues are not controlled soon by taking necessary precautions, the day where we would roam the streets wearing an oxygen mask will not be far.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 358, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e become extremely rare to find forcing use to find alternative medical solutions. ...
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Line 2, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to find alternative medical solutions. Although these problems can be a threat ...
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Line 2, column 401, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to find alternative medical solutions. Although these problems can be a threat to the b...
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Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...sea levels, deforestation, pollution is some of the growing concerns for humanity. All in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9921875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85154109581 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5516786553 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3076923077 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46153846154 7.06120827912 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149434147657 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053241531599 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422088016037 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961732439175 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595114523664 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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