Whether the loss of special creatures around us is the top issue or not ,faced by the public, has incured an increasingly debate in chanllenges of protecting the evironment. From my perspective, I am declined to take the reservation of those specific lives as the first place.
The loss of particular species will exert a series of severe troubles in every aspects of the nature.To begin with, the disappearance of certain kind of animal or plant does not mean the problems of its own, which will affect the whole food chain, causing the extinction of other species lived by them. A typical example is that certain kinds of plants rely on some birds to help them to process their seeds. Were these birds disappeared, there would have been impossible for the successful reproduction .Besides, those rare creatures are always with mysteries waiting for scientists to discover furthermore. That may be the sparks of another extingusish thought beneficial to the wellbeing of human beings, both in fortune and diversity of gene pool, as well as the potential resources for the promising future ahead of us.
Yet ,there are other issues requiring us to concern. On the one hand, the subtle pieces of plastic and remant of pesicides and so on are so fatal that a huge number of animals lose their lives in a gruesome way.Terribly, they have penetrated into the whole food chain from the lower levels to our daily food that no one can escape from taking in them. On top of that, the over emission of fossil fues is responsible for the acid rain, which is the main cause of deforestation. As a result, lots of lands turn from fercertile to balt. Moreover, a growing number of people suffers varies kinds of diseases especially cancers than ever before. Because they have to expose to dangerous environment stuffed with pollutants.It is exemplified that the more polluted our sorroundings are , the easier we are likely to be hit by those dangerous chemicals. That is why the expenditure on medicine are growing day by day.
In the light of the above issues , although protecting those particular animals and plants is of great value, I still consider there is nothing can be compared with the survial of ourselves. Consequently , we shall spare no effort to change those problems threatening us.Meanwhile, once people succeed dealing with all the pressing issues , the whole environments can be delivered along with the other creatures sharing the earth with us .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ther creatures sharing the earth with us .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, kind of, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95641646489 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80027474639 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583535108959 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6733881497 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.466666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5333333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107093678787 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030929140576 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286505274134 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0574906690019 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034250723942 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.