Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is clear that music has been a booming industry around the world over the past decades, accompanied by the increased number of social implications in many cases. Although some people overstate the impact of music leveling the differences between generations, the benefits that music has been broughtening about different cultures and ages should be viewed as significant.
There are numbers of reasons why music connects different ages. First people are able to either understand the lyrics or not, just feel the melody. For example, instrumental music is a sort of music that attracts a myriad of people around the world, which almost is played in coffee shops or shopping malls, whoever can listen without complaining. Second, Music does not require a degree to listen to or understand due to the main purpose of music is spreading the idea, the impliciting containing it-self to people. For instance, a national song is always played when an athlete in this country becomes a champion to connect the citizens with their patriotism.
There are also a number of reasons why music connects different cultures. In fact, Music is a global industry which can quickly spread over the world in just several minutes. Therefore, foreigners can easily come closer and chill with it, if they like it they would try to learn more about the culture to understand the song. In addition, For example, the artists are able to bring their culture into the lyrics to spread overseas to promote it. Thus, foreigners could comprehend more about the scenes, the country, even ways of living of the people.
In conclusion, Music is the best way to connect people of different ages and cultures. By spreading music over the world, people around the world are able to get more chances to know about your country, cultures and connect more people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, sort of, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02295081967 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57282012317 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8276176717 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.428571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23497374789 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882922319804 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715684094673 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159462436254 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403005706532 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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