Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Although each person experiences music in their own unique way, it can be agreed upon that music is universally enjoyed. This mutual appreciation for music could provide a common ground for people of different cultures and help them reach a better undrestanding of both their differences and similarities, yet, to claim the same statement for people of different ages may not be as valid.
In regard to the effect of music on the relation between cultures, one must differentiate between various genres of music. Some genres are specifically focused on reflecting cultures and even blending musical elements of different countries. These genres play a significant role in connecting different audiences from various parts of the world. By listening to such music, the audience is exposed to the art of another culture, while experiencing the music of their own country, all in one song. Considering that music is a powerful tool in regard to activating different feeling states, the audience may end up associating pleasant feelings with the new culture they are being exposed to, without having any prior knowledge of that culture. This in turn could result in a positive change in perspective and help people be more tolerant and understanding of other cultures.
In contrast to said argument, music could play a role in widening the gap between generations, considering that people in different ages may have very different tastes in music. For example, younger generations may be more inclined to listen to more up-beat music, whereas older generations tend to prefer more reserved genres of music. Since some people put a great value on other’s music tastes and often times use this as a metric for judging one’s character, such contrast in music taste could result in wrongful evaluation of different ages, as both generations may believe that their own taste is of higher value and quality, compared to the taste of the other age groups. These judgments not only will prevent different generations from getting closer, but may also result in increased resentments.
In conclusion, music could be considered a tool, and the way it is being used may define the scope and the quality of its effects. In the instance of cultures, I believe music could result in better connections, whereas between different age groups, the same reasoning may not be applied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14248704663 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79677701353 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512953367876 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2980349654 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.785714286 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23552487043 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910920268462 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534753259058 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159934067753 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526497040844 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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