Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that there are no limitations in languages and generations of music. While genres of music can be different from person to person, I strongly believe that music plays a crucial role in improving the relationship of human beings.
On the one hand, music has a great influence on every aspect of life. Though there were many changes in society, music adapting to human perceptions is appreciated in this day and age. For example, a song called Heal the world composed by Micheal Jackson in the 19th century carrying the message of peace and humanity is still mentioned to raise the awareness of the following generations about moral values. Moreover, a masterpiece written by Taylor Swift, namely Lover, has reached far over 200 million watching on Youtube since it reflexes profoundly the emotions of people who are falling in love.
On the other hand, music helps people live in harmony with one another. The first reason is everyone has an equal right to take part in a public concert and enjoy compositions. Therefore, people have more chances to integrate and adapt to a new environment by engaging in local activities regardless of ages and nationalities. Another reason is music can be a great asset to make friends with strangers. For example, to break out the monotonous atmosphere at the first meeting, it is a good way to embark on a warm song or hold a musical instrument exchange, which young generations are likely to do.
In conclusion, it is impossible to neglect the significant impacts that music bringing us, especially getting on well with people from all walks of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90073529412 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77362600028 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7839394879 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.083333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41666666667 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212677782999 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678228610981 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430272908579 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119293252443 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366072220756 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.