Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living .
What is your opinion about this?
What other times in history would be interesting to live in?
We are living in a rapid changing world that is backed by the advance of modern technologies. As a matter of fact, today’s world is capable of providing humans the convenient that their desired. That said, a majority of people claim that this is the golden period to live in throughout the entire history. This essay will delve into the author’s opinion on this matter and also suggest the other interesting period to live in.
Firstly, we may mention the indisputable fact that today’s life quality has been dramatically raised over the few decades mostly because of the the revolutionary of technology. Take smartphones as an example, ever since the creation of it, people have been given the ability to deal with everyday tasks effectively by this multi-functional device. However, advancements in medical treatments and methods is lengthen human life expectancy, therefore creating another issue named overpopulation. The most familiar example of this is the overload of public infrastructure such as hospitals, schools and roads. As a result, these facilities become less efficiency and sluggish in providing the necessary value for the people.
On the other hand, another intriguing bygone time is the period before smartphones were invented. Although smartphones are the fascinating invention of humankind, they are dominating human’s life by making people spend many hours interact with virtual applications rather than socializing as a part of the community. Human will always want to take part in the society, and because of that, the time before smartphones is when people need to physically socialize with each other.
In conclusion, it is true that that many people claim now is the perfect time to live in, I believe each period of time in the history has its own attractive story. As for the pros and cons of today’s world, technology has been raising the living standard for the people and overpopulation becomes a potential threat to humankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, as for, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24921135647 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96820114443 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577287066246 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5466573474 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205284616488 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668881795372 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709449243843 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12679649351 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720433113272 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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