It has been suggested that the way one person is brought up by his parents affects his success in the future.While it may be true to a certain extent , I believe that there are also other factors that could influence the victory of a person
Parents play an important role in their children's success.What children learn from their parents in their childhood and young adult life would influence their thinking process and creates a strong or weak mentality.A strong mind is mandatory for success. For example , when a child is taught to hard work for achieving success he is more likely to work hard in the future to fulfill his wishes.That means parental influence is certainly a crucial factor in a person's success.
However, I believe the other factors such as a strong determination also can change one's life.A determination to succeed could overcome the obstacles in the life and becomes successful in the long term.For instance,many successful Indian politicians do not come from the good family background.Few of them are even brought up in an orphanage.That would definitely prove that a strong desire to succeed is more important than any other factors.
To conclude, although the style of parents' upbringing affects the child's attitude and victory, I think the determination to go ahead is more vital
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08294930876 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92355855006 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589861751152 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.779184935 49.4020404114 299% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 275.75 106.682146367 258% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.25 20.7667163134 261% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5 7.06120827912 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207029128726 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108517207638 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721586329911 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112885369916 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539138887924 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.6 13.0946893788 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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